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Ral Joseph's avatar

For some reason Laney. you may think I will think racism we have taken every recesession, a break and got some rest in the last decades, but no!

It’s literally everywhere, in job applications, on the streets in churches, in the market everywhere.

I’ve been a victim multiple times.

I love you for writing this.

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<Tom Kane>'s avatar

Your poem's strength lies in its earnestness and accessibility. It doesn't try to be clever or complex; it just wants to make a straightforward point about human unity, and it does that effectively. The resolution between the two trees feels earned rather than forced, which isn't always easy to pull off in this kind of allegorical piece.

A solid effort that wears its message openly and honestly.

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